First feedback

Likes
Deborah " I like the story line in general , the way it flows from present to past ,back to present"


Josh " I like the chronological order of the way the film is presented and the effect of the sillouhette used to portray Lauren"


Ms Nair "Powerful opening, good how it starts with present to past"
Dislikes/Improvements


Josh " It would be more realistic to use a belt or rubberbands used to tie round her arm rather than cloth"




Abigail "To dramatic (..) unlikely for all events to happen to one person so young"


Ms Nair " Think about attention to detail , make it visually intense for example drugs and the baby objects".